The book "A Humument" by Tom
Phillips is an illustrated version of the novel "A Human Document" by
W. H. Mallock. However the illustrations
in the book do more than just add pictures to a story. Phillips’ drawings in “A Humument” completely
change “A Human Document” all together. To
transform the book, Phillips drew and painted over the words on the pages to
create a completely new story. While
most of the original text is covered by the illustration, Phillips leaves some
words un-obscured to create a new story.
Since Phillips was limited to only specific words on each page, he used
illustrations to augment the words he chose to reveal on the page. The constraint on the words available to him
allowed Phillips the opportunity to further enhance his chosen words to create
not only a poem but also a work of art.
There are many art elements and design
principles that make up all works of art.
Phillips uses many of these principles in his illustrations to help
describe the poem on the page. One
important design principle is the center of emphasis. The center of emphasis of an image is an area
or object within the artwork that draws attention and becomes a focal point. The center of emphasis can be a highly
detailed area within a simple composition or an area of simplicity within a
complex work of art. Other examples of
centers of emphasis include an area or object of bright color or a large image
that dominates the work of art. In a
large number of cases, the center of emphasis abides by the rule of two
thirds. This dictates that one of the
most effective places to put a center of emphasis is a corner position roughly
two thirds of the way to the top or bottom of the page and two thirds of the
way to the left or right. Phillips uses
all of these aspects that define a center of emphasis to help convey his
message.
Another design principle used heavily by
Phillips in “A Humument” is movement. Movement
in a piece of artwork is the path the viewer’s eye takes through the artwork
that can be directed along lines, edges, shapes and colors. Movement is created through contrasting areas
of color or arrangements of shapes and figures in a work of art. The ways the art elements are manipulated and
combined form a path for the viewer.
Some examples of movement in works of art include lines moving around a
work, paths of shapes that flow through a composition, and colorful
brushstrokes swirling across a light background. All of these examples show how the design
principle movement directs a viewer’s eye from some start point through some
path in a work of art. In addition to
emphasis and movement, value is another very important design principle used by
Phillips in “A Humument.” In a work of
art, value is defined as the relative lightness or darkness of a color.
All of Phillips’ illustrations in “A
Humument” contain some of these design principles to help convey the message of
the poem on each page. Phillips drew
important illustrations that reflected the meaning of the words on the page and
placed them in key spots on the page to create a center of emphasis and give
further meaning to the page. The center
of emphasis is the first aspect of the image that the viewer’s eye jumps to, so
using the emphasis point to show the most important part of the meaning of the
text convays to the reader some of the important aspects of the text. Movement is another design principle Phillips
used to create a story on each page. On
the majority of the pages of “A Humument” the words that are not covered by
illustrations are connected in a thread of words. The contrast between the bubble of color
around the words and the drawings in the background create a streamlined way to
read the words highlighted by Phillips.
The movement created by the lines pulls the reader’s eye down the
connected words in the order they were intended to be read. Another important design principle used by
Phillips to bring attention to certain words is value. This design principle is useful to highlight
important sections of the page. Phillips
uses value to hide certain words under dark colors and highlight some words by
using light colors. Together these
design principles used by Phillips create a poem that is also a work of art on
every page.
I think it is interesting how Phillips uses aspects of visual design to manipulate the reader into seeing what he wants in terms of where the attention is drawn on each page. I think it is cool how he is able to literally manipulate the reader into what he wants to be conveyed on each page by using techniques you mentioned like drawing the movement of the eye to each word and making a certain part of the image the focal point. "A Humument" is a significant piece of conceptual writing because it uses images to tell a story and manipulate the text given into something completely different. The whole idea behind conceptual poetry is to take preexisting text and change the context to change the meaning into what the author wants to say. "A Humument" does this in an interesting way by using art and visual design to recontextualize a story into something completely different but still worth reading.
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