Here is a revised version of my first long essay:
During the progression of this
course, I frequently find myself asking the question, “what is conceptual
poetry?” and the even more burning question, “what’s the point?” Reading
different texts and poetry every day, it seems that conceptual writing is
pointless, even boring. Beginning the course with several works by Goldsmith,
there was some shock at the types of writing he produced. As an individual who
has never been exposed to conceptual writing, it is difficult to accept it as a
legitimate form of writing. There is a parallel discussion to the validity of
conceptual writing, which explores the meaning of art and what makes something
fall into the category of art. This discussion includes works such as Andy
Warhol’s “Campbell’s Soup Cans” and Duchamp’s “Fountain”, which are seemingly
everyday objects that are placed into the category of art. Objects such as a
can of tomato soup and a urinal can be arguably lacking in artistic because
they are not creative. On the other end, some may consider these object art
because they are placed in a different context-a painting or an art museum.
Similarly, conceptual works such as Goldsmith’s “Soliloquy” and “Day” can be
discussed in the same way, questioning whether or not conceptual writing can be
considered creative writing. As the questions of what conceptual poetry is and
its significance become more prevalent while reading conceptual works, the
answers to these questions can be found through exploration of texts by authors
such as Way and Philip to define conceptual poetry as a type of writing that
uses appropriation to change the meaning of text into something else that is
sometimes difficult to determine. Through exploring works such as M. NourbeSe Philip’s Zong!, the significance of conceptual
writing can be defined as recontextualizing in order to give the same text a
different meaning in a different context to get a specific point across.
Conceptual writing is difficult to understand because it is not as simple to
find significance in text that is sometimes seemingly mundane and boring.
An interesting poet named Nyein
Way writes conceptual poetry as well as explores and defines the idea of
conceptual poetry. His poem entitled “What is Conceptual Poetry?” is an
intriguing piece that defines conceptual writing while also functioning as a
piece of conceptual writing in itself.
An excerpt from the poem presents an accurate definition of conceptual
poetry:
The format of the writing, the inclusion of
letters and numbers, makes it seem like Way has simply copied the definition of
the word ‘conceptual’ from a dictionary or a textbook. This process fits the
method of other famous authors such as Goldsmith, whose famous poem “Day”
involves him copying every single word verbatim from a newspaper. The
structural element means that conceptual poetry has a structure and process
that went into creating it. The functional aspect means that there is a new
context and message that the author is trying to convey with this new context
and interpretations it might lend itself to. It is also interesting to note
that Way defines conceptual poetry as having a “functional meaning” and being
“spiritual”. This adds to the fact that conceptual writing has some meaning and
purpose. This meaning can be anything, no matter how boring the piece may seem.
Although it may be difficult to see the purpose of conceptual poetry, it takes
some searching to find the significance of it. This fact allows one to further
appreciate conceptual poetry as art. The artistic aspect of it is to force the
reader to dig deeper and analyze the reason for its existence. “What is
Conceptual Poetry?” does a good job at answering the question of what
conceptual poetry is by literally defining it and allowing the interpretation
that it has a spiritual aspect.
A
piece of writing that we are currently reading in class that has a special
meaning is Zong! by M. NourbeSe
Philip. Zong! is a book of poetry
that encompasses the event of the Zong massacre. The poems use letters and
words from the documented court case. This conceptual writing has struck me as
meaningful because it is easier to find its significance, unlike a majority of
Goldsmith’s conceptual poetry. The purpose is to “lock myself [Philip] into
this particular and peculiar discursive landscape in the belief that the story
of these African men, women, and children thrown overboard in an attempt to
collect insurance monies, the story that can only be told by not telling, is
locked in this text.” (Philip 191). Conversely, what is the purpose of
Goldsmith’s “Soliloquy”? It takes more interpretation and work to determine
what the significance is. An article on the Jacket
2 discusses Zong! and gives a new
perspective on its place in the conceptual realm. The article explains that
Philip acknowledges the fact that Zong!
is conceptual due to the “erasure of the author, apparent appropriation of found
text working within a rigidly defined set of rules, its composition
is inextricably linked to the computer.” (Jacket
2). This process, also known as constraint, is seen throughout Zong! with a large amount of repetition
and structure. There is, however, another element to the book that makes it
more appealing than the traditional conceptual writing, and that is “something
that underlies and emerges within the text that she [Philip] calls “spiritual,”
for lack of a more satisfying term.” (Jacket
2). This “spiritual” element is what makes Zong! more interesting and less mundane. Zong! is clearly conceptual writing because it takes text and
places it in a new context in order to give it a different meaning. It is
interesting that the text from the court case is changed so much to tell a
different story with a radically different purpose than the original text. Fitting
the definition of conceptual writing, the “spiritual” element of Zong! makes it easier to determine a
purpose for writing, which shows the significance of conceptual poetry.
It is very
striking to note that the “spiritual” element of Zong! is also mentioned in Way’s definition of conceptual in “What
is Conceptual Poetry?” Other words similar to spiritual used by Way are “ideas,
fancy, imagination, emotion machine” (Poemhunter.com).
It is intriguing that the Jacket 2
article conveys that the evident spiritual element of Zong! makes it a little different from conceptual writing,
juxtaposed to Way’s “What is Conceptual Poetry?” that includes the word
spiritual in his definition of conceptual poetry. This contradiction emphasizes
the fact that conceptual poetry has varying definitions and meanings to each
individual. Jacket 2 explains that
the contours of
conceptual poetry are still very much in flux. The visibility of a work like Zong!
within the field of vision of this debate may push critics and scholars to work
beyond notions of “pure” and “impure” commitments to certain rigidly
process-based notions of conceptualism, to develop a working definition that
can accommodate broader, more (w)holistic approaches (Jacket 2).
With that being said, maybe Zong!
is a little more enjoyable than other conceptual works I have been exposed to
because my definition of conceptual writing is different than someone else’s.
Writing is an art form that has to do something emotionally or provoke my
thoughts and stir my spirit. Art is a very profound form of expression where
everyone can look at it a little differently. Jacket 2 is correct in saying that conceptual writing should have a
“working definition” and it should be very open to different interpretations,
as should any type of writing or self-expression. This fact puts conceptual
writing in perspective, allowing us to see the significance of it. Conceptual
writing is a different form of writing that is worthwhile to read and
interpret, even if it may not seem so. The purpose of Goldsmith’s “Day” is not
to read the entire thing, but to read small sections and be able to appreciate
it as a recontextualization of language. Goldsmith’s “Day” is significant, as
all other conceptual writing, because it changes the way we think of the same
text, it is telling a different story about a newspaper than the newspaper
would itself. It is so interesting because this text already exists, it is simply
being recycled and reused to create something else that is worth reading.
My mind has
been expanded, my comfort zone has been tested, and my opinion on art and
writing has been changed forever. Ever since being initially exposed to
conceptual writing, there is a new appreciation level for writing in general.
After the initial shock and skepticism, I have learned to accept and embrace
novel ideas and forms of expression in terms of conceptual writing. As for the
questions that I struggle with when exploring conceptual writing and its
significance, these works by Way and Philip presented above help in answering
those questions. Way helps define conceptual poetry as a recontextualization of
language, which changes the meaning of it into something spiritual and
functional. An example of this is Zong!,
which shows how changing the context of a certain text can tell a radically
different story and have a totally different meaning and purpose.
Here is a link to Way's poem "What is Conceptual Poetry?" http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/what-is-conceptual-poetry/%E2%80%8B
Works Cited
"Nyein Way - Chief Cultural Advisor & Literary
Faculty." Theatre for Humanity. N.p., n.d. Web. 25 Feb. 2015. <http://theatreforhumanity.info/new-yangon-theatre institut/biographies--new-yangon/nyein-way---chief-cultural.html>.
Philip, Marlene Nourbese. Zong! Middletown, CT: Wesleyan
UP, 2008. Print.
Poem, Nyein Way. "What Is Conceptual Poetry?" Poemhunter.com.
N.p., n.d. Web. 25 Feb. 2015.
<http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/what-is-conceptual-poetry/%E2%80%8B>.
Shockley, Evie. "Is 'Zong!' Conceptual Poetry? Yes, It
Isn't." Jacket 2. N.p., 17 Sept. 2013. Web. 25 Feb. 2015. <http://jacket2.org/article/zong-conceptual-poetry-yes-it isn%E2%80%99t>.